I haven't been writing much lately, and was really hoping to write something upbeat. But this came... sometimes you've just gotta take what the muse gives ya.
The get up and the go
The saddle and the reins
A shovel full of coal
Lame horse against a train
The pulse and the steam
The weight pulled behind
All the roads into Rome
But one so hard to find
CHORUS
We’ve all been to hell, but then
Some don’t make it back again
Are you thinking of a name?
Ding dong, the bells ring out
And whispers trickle through the crowd
Are you thinking of a name?
I used to have a friend
Who’d steal my bathroom pills
And try to numb his pain
With rolled up dollar bills
Bruises down his arms
Like falling minor scales
He could hide it in his eyes
You’d never know half the tale
REPEAT CHORUS
BRIDGE
Everyone knows someone reaching out
Without a doubt, without a doubt
The get up and the go
The saddle and the reins
A shovel full of coal
Lame horse against a train
REPEAT CHORUS
The Country Road
One songwriter's journey
Monday 8 October 2018
Friday 8 June 2018
Standing There With Me (2nd revision)
I got feedback on the original and 1st edit from 3 different writers groups including this one. The major thread was that more verses and story line were wanted from the original. My 1st revision added a verse, but I still didn't feel 100% about it. The crux of the song's inspiration for me was the very first line, and what it meant to me. But I'd wimped out or was lazy in the first 2 cracks at it as fart as letting the listener in on that secret. This new version adds a final verse that sums it up and gives the song a true ending. That was a problem from the start. Another was that some writers were puzzled by the changing tense of the "standing there" lines in each verse. I didn't have that issue, but maybe that's becuase I knew the untold meaning and where the story went in my head. Now, it finally goes there in the song too. I tweaked a few other bits here and there too.
Help me build a blue sky for dreaming bigger dreams
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
When we met, I tripped right over my tongue
But somehow I made you laugh, and that first lock came undone
And, ever since that day, every day's been a better one
Because I've had you standing there with me
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
I never really wanted kids until you told me that you did
Now I swear my heart has grown, I feel it bursting through my ribs
A lot of things have changed, yeah this old dog has learned new tricks
Because I've had you standing there with me
We’ve had our sleepless nights, and wiped away some tears
Once or twice I know it felt like way more than our share
Hell, I just can’t imagine getting through these last few years
If I didn’t have you standing there with me
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
So meet me under a steeple, or with a justice of the peace
At a clearing in the woods, or ankle deep on a beach
It doesn’t matter where, just so long as you’ll be
Standing there with me
No it doesn’t matter where, just so long as you’ll be
Standing there with me
Come on girl, let me wrap my world around you and your faded jeans
Standing There With Me
Come on girl, let me wrap my world around you and your faded jeansHelp me build a blue sky for dreaming bigger dreams
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
When we met, I tripped right over my tongue
But somehow I made you laugh, and that first lock came undone
And, ever since that day, every day's been a better one
Because I've had you standing there with me
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
I never really wanted kids until you told me that you did
Now I swear my heart has grown, I feel it bursting through my ribs
A lot of things have changed, yeah this old dog has learned new tricks
Because I've had you standing there with me
We’ve had our sleepless nights, and wiped away some tears
Once or twice I know it felt like way more than our share
Hell, I just can’t imagine getting through these last few years
If I didn’t have you standing there with me
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
So meet me under a steeple, or with a justice of the peace
At a clearing in the woods, or ankle deep on a beach
It doesn’t matter where, just so long as you’ll be
Standing there with me
No it doesn’t matter where, just so long as you’ll be
Standing there with me
Come on girl, let me wrap my world around you and your faded jeans
Friday 20 April 2018
Overcome
Sometimes the shadows call my name
They don’t care about the sun
And I keep playing at their game
Feeling like I’m the only one
Whoever got knocked down while trying
Gotta let the light in or I’m done
CHORUS
There’s cold fear all over out there
Someone else has stared down what you’re staring at now
Over river or wall, you can climb, you can crawl
It’s been done, it’s been done, it’s been done
There’s cold fear all over out there
Someone else has stared down what you’re staring at now
Over river or wall, you can climb, you can crawl
It’s been done, it’s been done, it’s been done
Overcome
I just watched a movie about that guy
Who wrote A Brief History of Time
And I know it’s impossible to compare
His load to mine
But we all get knocked down while trying
Gotta dig your heels into the grime
REPEAT CHORUS
They don’t care about the sun
And I keep playing at their game
Feeling like I’m the only one
Whoever got knocked down while trying
Gotta let the light in or I’m done
CHORUS
There’s cold fear all over out there
Someone else has stared down what you’re staring at now
Over river or wall, you can climb, you can crawl
It’s been done, it’s been done, it’s been done
There’s cold fear all over out there
Someone else has stared down what you’re staring at now
Over river or wall, you can climb, you can crawl
It’s been done, it’s been done, it’s been done
Overcome
I just watched a movie about that guy
Who wrote A Brief History of Time
And I know it’s impossible to compare
His load to mine
But we all get knocked down while trying
Gotta dig your heels into the grime
REPEAT CHORUS
Monday 5 March 2018
My Worst
This one is clearly not a country song. I wrote it on a bus ride to Toronto one morning last week. It was nice to have my old writing method resurface after so long in hibernation (with a few exceptions, more or less since I started trying to write country). The old method was that songs would just come to me, and I'd recognize in them the thoughts, emotions, pressures, fears, etc. from my life that'd been bubbling under the surface for the recent past. It's clearly not straightforward enough to be country. I'm fine with that.
I was delirious
The drugs just didn’t agree
There was no telling
What I did and didn’t really see
I was terrified
And I looked anything but strong
On a horse by my bedside
You rode the whole way along
CHORUS
More a blessing than a curse
You’ve seen me at my best and worst
Much more a blessing than a curse
You’ve seen me at my worst
I dropped the ball
Nothing’ll ever be that tough
Nearly lost the family jewels
These clichés don’t hurt quite as much
REPEAT CHORUS
BRIDGE
I will try until my dying day
Yet know some debts can’t be repaid
And that’s okay
REPEAT CHORUS
I was delirious
The drugs just didn’t agree
There was no telling
What I did and didn’t really see
I was terrified
And I looked anything but strong
On a horse by my bedside
You rode the whole way along
CHORUS
More a blessing than a curse
You’ve seen me at my best and worst
Much more a blessing than a curse
You’ve seen me at my worst
I dropped the ball
Nothing’ll ever be that tough
Nearly lost the family jewels
These clichés don’t hurt quite as much
REPEAT CHORUS
BRIDGE
I will try until my dying day
Yet know some debts can’t be repaid
And that’s okay
REPEAT CHORUS
Thursday 14 December 2017
Standing There With Me
On November 16, I woke up at 4:20 am from a dream. In it, I was standing in a booth at a huge stadium. Tim McGraw and Jason Aldean came through a door behind me and said quick hellos and patted me on the back as they passed on their way down through the bleachers to an island stage in the middle of the floor crowd. They were co-hosting a big fundraiser concert. Jason was starting the show with his latest hit. I’d written it. The first line was all I heard before I woke up. I went straight downstairs and spent the next hour or so quietly writing on the sofa. This is the first song I’ve written in months. Very happy about it.
Come on girl, let me wrap my world around you and your faded jeans
Help me build a blue sky for dreaming bigger dreams
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
Remember when we met, I tripped right over my tongue
But somehow I made you laugh, and that first lock came undone
Well, ever since that day, every day's been a better one
Because I've had you standing there with me
BRIDGE
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
I never really wanted kids until you told me that you did
Now I swear my heart has grown, I feel it bursting through my ribs
A lot of things have changed, yeah this old dog has learned new tricks
Because I've had you standing there with me
BRIDGE
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
Come on girl, let me wrap my world around you and your faded jeans
Help me build a blue sky for dreaming bigger dreams
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
Come on girl, let me wrap my world around you and your faded jeans
Help me build a blue sky for dreaming bigger dreams
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
Remember when we met, I tripped right over my tongue
But somehow I made you laugh, and that first lock came undone
Well, ever since that day, every day's been a better one
Because I've had you standing there with me
BRIDGE
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
I never really wanted kids until you told me that you did
Now I swear my heart has grown, I feel it bursting through my ribs
A lot of things have changed, yeah this old dog has learned new tricks
Because I've had you standing there with me
BRIDGE
Life sure can take twists and turns on its way
Winding through these precious few lucky days
Come on girl, let me wrap my world around you and your faded jeans
Help me build a blue sky for dreaming bigger dreams
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
When all is said and done, oh darlin' it won't mean a thing
If I can't have you standing there with me
Friday 30 June 2017
Turn Up The Fiddle
Well, I’ve been weighed down, brick of life
But I’m digging out, the pile goes on for miles
This week has taken ’bout a lifetime to go by
Now I’m ready for some Friday dynamite, dynamite
Yeah, Dynamite, let’s dance
CHORUS
Let’s get out in the middle
Lay it down on the floor
Tell the band, turn up the fiddle
Cuz I could use a little more
Tell the band, turn up the fiddle
Cuz I could use a little more
You’ve been leaning on that bar too long
I think it’s time I got your feet moving to this song
Leave your drink, I’ll buy another one later on
Something tells me this place’ll close before we’re done
Yeah, Dynamite, let’s dance
SHORT CHORUS
BRIDGE
There’s a time and place for slow dancin’, but it ain’t now
It’s time to kick your seat out, time to pick your feet up, time is running out
You wanna stretch this night until daylight? Well I can show you how
C’mon, stretch this night until daylight. Yeah I can show you how
LONG CHORUS
Tuesday 23 May 2017
Milk
I've recently been introduced to one of life's little heart-wrenching experiences: not being able to console a newborn who only wants his mother's breast milk. It seems that's all our little fella wants... all the time! hehe.
I wrote all the lyrics and melody for this one while soothing him in the living-room armchair as mamma caught some much-needed sleep upstairs.
Oh, I see the way you look at her
And I can’t help but be jealous
I’d surely lend a hand if I were
Not just one of the fellas
CHORUS
But I will rise like the sun when you open your eyes
I will wipe away every tear that you cry
Do every single little thing that I can till you get your fill
Oh I will rock your cradle every afternoon
I will tell you stories of the man in the moon
Yeah, I’ll love you like your mama will
I just ain’t got milk
Oh, I will love you like your mama will
I just ain’t got milk
Even when your eyes are closed
I know you’re dreaming of boobies
I wish that I could get a two-bit role
In one of those movies
CHORUS
BRIDGE
The only thing you know is the river that flows white gold
Yeah the only thing you know is white gold
CHORUS
I wrote all the lyrics and melody for this one while soothing him in the living-room armchair as mamma caught some much-needed sleep upstairs.
Oh, I see the way you look at her
And I can’t help but be jealous
I’d surely lend a hand if I were
Not just one of the fellas
CHORUS
But I will rise like the sun when you open your eyes
I will wipe away every tear that you cry
Do every single little thing that I can till you get your fill
Oh I will rock your cradle every afternoon
I will tell you stories of the man in the moon
Yeah, I’ll love you like your mama will
I just ain’t got milk
Oh, I will love you like your mama will
I just ain’t got milk
Even when your eyes are closed
I know you’re dreaming of boobies
I wish that I could get a two-bit role
In one of those movies
CHORUS
BRIDGE
The only thing you know is the river that flows white gold
Yeah the only thing you know is white gold
CHORUS
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